Script

I am working on a script where I try to recreate this ending. The idea is I play a short live action skit, and I mean really short, where I’m the nerd and I punch a Roger Rabbit prop as the Nerd. Then I cut to the screenshot, and do voice over saying a rant about the game. Then 1 last live action segment where I throw the game at the wall and it bounces back and hits me in the face. Does this sound like a good idea? Should I message James so he can do the voice over instead? If anyone is interested, I can share the script privately to you and be open to suggestions on how to make it better/more authentic to 2006 era AVGN. Please tell me what you think.